A strong instalment in that waffy, yucky-stuff sort of way.
A couple things jumped out at me. At one point you have Lois' internal monologue questioning her willingness to give her self so completely to a man so quickly. The implication was, here was a man she just met and now she's ready to jump him at the slightest provocation. I don't see where there would be any conflict in her mind. Lois has long ago come to the realization that she was/is in love with Clark, and she also knows that Charlie is Clark (just not why, yet), so her actions are perfectly logical under the circumstances of someone who doesn't want to lose out on her chance a second time.
One other thing 'bothered' me. It isn't a condemnation of this fic by any means because many writers use it. But I hate it when Clark refers to Lois using the term 'baby'. To me you can use a lot of endearments that will work, but I can't see Lois Lane as anyone's 'baby'. To my mind, baby is somewhat derogatory and condescending. It's a term that is used by 'romeos' and 'slick operators' who are merely in pursuit of gratification. I can see Claude using such a term, but not someone like Clark, nor can I see Lois appreciating it.
Maybe it's just me.
Tank (who still thinks that once Charlie is revealed as Clark it's not going to be a pretty sight)
