Well, I don't think anyone was trying to say that you were wrong, simply that it wasn't quite what we expected, given what we'd seen on the show.

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a) I think that *he* is the one we expect to win all Scrabble games...
He might be the one you expect to win, but I definitely expect Lois to win. Not because she's smarter, but because she's the one who *cares* about winning. Everytime we saw them play any kind of game - be it a board game or some sort of verbal sparring - Lois was the one who went for the kill, while Clark just seemed to be having fun.

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b) If you noticed, he didn't *search* for the name. He just knew it and used it. Besides, he speaks Dutch
Well, we didn't see him search for it, but I was under the impression that he had been searching for obscure words/names at some point in the past. Otherwise I can't imagine what he was doing here. <G>


But that said, I really did enjoy the story, and whether you change the characters or not, I still think it's cute. It's your story, so the possibilityof changing it is totally up to you.

Annie


Being a reporter is as much a diagnosis as a job description. ~Anna Quindlen