Well, you have our heroes in an interesting pickle now, don't you? Unfortunately, that's starting to give me ideas, and I'm resisting the urge to volunteer again for another part. It's usually a terrible thing when I start to get ideas. Just ask Tank. Last time that happened, he ended up with children.
OK, maybe I'll give it another shot. What's the worst that can happen: Lois as a slave and Clark with his head cut off and stuck on a wall? Wait, that's been done before.
Nice job of explaining some of the loose ends from the last part. I was wondering just why Clark could hear a conversation that Lex was totally oblivious to, and why Clark didn't bother to go after Luthor. I would have thought under any circumstances, Clark would never have let Luthor get away with Lois. But the sudden weakness due to Kryptonite in Luthor's pocket makes sense.
Only one problem I have with the part here. Marriage licenses in Las Vegas are only given out at the courthouse downtown. And you have to stand in a fairly long line after filling out your application, taken from a kiosk, in crayon. Guess they don't trust anybody with anything sharp. I know this because I've been with people who have gotten married in Las Vegas. So Lex would have had to stop for the license downtown and then find a chapel to get married in. In the wedding I went to, the couple got their license, had a theme wedding (Elvis with two songs), and then went off "backstage" with a judge to conduct the real ceremony plus the signing of the marriage license by the judge.
Other than that, the rest of the part was quite appropriately evil.
