Right at the very beginning, as Lois and Clark started talking (before things turned weird and I realized it was a dream), I got the feeling everything was a bit too "pat" if that's the right word. If I am totally honest, I have to admit I actually was a bit disappointed. I thought you were making Clark's decision too easy, bringing on the revelation too soon. Then I continued reading, and realized what you were doing. I should have had more faith in you!
Very cleverly done, and lots of fun to read!
If I must chose, I vote for short and frequent posts, rather than longer and less frequent. In fact, daily sounds about right.
- Vicki
