This is just great!
I love the story idea and how you fill it with lots of great, funny and hilarious details.
YAY, Clark is still an option
I think he should start working on those mind-reading skills of his...
Oh, and muses like chocolate. Well, at least mine does. So, maybe you can convince your muse to stay, if you offer her some -um, make that a lot of- candy bars. Chocolate might also help her fight the gremlin... Just an idea
~Julia
