Oh thankyou, you're all too kind!
I'm currently working on posting part 14. Acutally, I guess it's more like 14a or something. It's only about 1 1/2 pages, but my Dad looked it over and told me to go for it.
It's kinda funny how this is working: Mom doesn't want me using dial-up during the day, so I have to use the laptop which has DSL (my computer will not take DSL). The laptop does not take disks. My computer cannot write cds. So, I wrote the part to a disk and my dad is writing it to a cd on his computer, which will then be transfered to the laptop. SHEESH! :rolleyes:
I'm glad to know I got everyone in character.
My dad helped me with the big "Sandy" punchline; I had the period after cologne, and he pointed out it would be too vague. That's the closest this story has come to being betaed.