Another cool part! I love it!
One thing:
"Please, Dr. Klein? You're the only one I would even *think* of asking! And we really need you---Lois is going crazy from all the weird changes that have been happening in her body."
Dr. Klein didn't notice the name! (Well, of course, knowing Dr. Klein, I'm not that amazed

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Keep writing!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.