Everything sounds just fine the way it's written, but if you want, you don't have to put things in parentheses.
Stuff like that can be tagged on to the end...
But if you like it the way it is, don't change it!! It's only a minor suggestion from a loopy artist. I look forward to the next part!
One last thing: /me glares at Stella. She better not horn in on Lois & Clark LOL...I know I know, RAFO (ray-fo). I like saying that out loud LOL.
Hi Jen..
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