AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!
This is such a great rewrite, I love Lois's insight and understanding of her behaviour and actions!!!

But if somebody else doesn't do it first, I will have to "thwack" Clark myself!!! Of course she can be "in love" with both Supes and Clark at the same time -- duh?!?!?
This is a GREAT story!!!

Lots of WAFF's, angst, and well written. Now hurry up and finish it!!
S (who is NOT being patient this time -- you guy's fault for leaving it there!!

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