Nicely done, Anna. Previous posters have picked out all the things I wanted to comment on and said pretty much what I would - enjoyed the switching dialogue, was a little disappointed that Lois didn't get to honk the car horn while Juliana went over the bridge <g>, but then we wouldn't have had smoochies when Superman rescued her if you'd done it that way. Or if we did you'd have had us after you with pitchforks. <G>

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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers