Hi,
Great part.

This Lois don't have heart or soul.

She deserve to married Luthor.
He looked at the world below; at the place that had become his home. He couldn’t lose all he’d worked so hard to achieve. He couldn’t let Luthor, of all people, win. He had to find a way out. If not for him, he had to do it for Lois.
:rolleyes:
He looked at the world below; at the place that had become his home. He couldn’t lose all he’d worked so hard to achieve. He couldn’t let Luthor, of all people, win. He had to find a way out. If not for him, he had to do it for Lois.
:rolleyes: He is dumb or what?
More soon, please.
MAF
