Just to let you know I am reading and loving this story! I was very happy to see you post Part 16.

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Clark wants to have a private chat with Lois somewhere. Gee, wonder what he wants to talk about? I can't wait to see his reaction when he realizes that Lois has figured him out already
That brings up an interesting point. If my memory serves me well, the reason Lois hasn't let on that she knows about Superman is because she wanted to show Clark that she cared for him as Clark, right? (Please tell me I'm not mixing up your story with someone else's. That is the problem with reading too many WIPs.) Since Clark is giving indications of wanting to talk to Lois, and since it is pretty obvious what he wants to talk about, Lois doesn't have much time left to make her point. Up until now, she has certainly been nicer and friendlier to Clark but her actions can still be taken as "friendly" and nothing more. Maybe she should turn up the heat? (hint. hint.)

Looking forward to Part 17!

- Vicki

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