Okay, so you forgot to add in the last wham. I could've lived with that if you just could have given Lois a decent haircut, but noooooo, Yvonne has to stay evil. No whams, no haircut. No fun.
I suppose some gentle readers would have thought this was a perfectly fine ending. Not really too waffy or mushy. Not indulging in any of the real yucky stuff, but it held the promise for that. It laid the well traveled foundation for the typically implied 'happy ever after'
So, I guess most would say 'good job'. But I'm still disappointed in that last missed wham.
Tank (who figures there will be a sequel but doesnt' really see the need for one unless there is some way to make it not just another 'they grow to truly love each other over time' fic... perhaps, a haircut for Lois?)
