Lab, the ellipses are great for effect. I say keep 'em. You have always blown me away, and this is no exception. LOL but at the same time you are killing me with suspense!!! Please keep it coming!
"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." Chris Reeve
"Whatever comes our way, whatever battle we have raging inside us, we always have a choice. It's the choices that make us who we are, and we can always choose to do what's right." Peter Parker
LOL but at the same time you are killing me with suspense!!! Please keep it coming! 
