Finally, I get to catch up! I'm sorry I'm not going to have time to do more than read and dash off some hit and run comments. The story is deserving of much more attention than that and I really wish I had more time to share all my favourite quotes.
Erin, your stories are always such a joy to read. From the very first paragraph here you had me hooked and I knew this was going to be one of those stories to wallow in.
You paint a wonderfully detailed and vivid picture of a lonely Lois, wishing for more here. I too loved the little details like the BMW and your original characters - like Agnes - are always so skillfully and sharply observed.
Excellent starting segment - on to part two!
LabRat
