Originally posted by HatMan:
One thing I'm wondering about...
Lois's jaw dropped, and there was a collective gasp from the crowd of co-workers around her. *A man?* Lois thought. *How could it be a man? There was no such thing as a flying man!*
Why is Lois thinking in the past tense?
Also (okay, so it's more than one thing. Sue me.
), I always wondered how Clark lifted the Messenger into orbit without problems... after he'd
ripped the door off.
Yeah, oops! Sorry, that one got away from me during my cursory glance over.
Thanks for the reminder! Come to think of it, how DID Supes in the Pilot get into that launch vehicle? Surely the doors would be sealed from the inside and would need to be broken (key word broken, right?) into. Hmmm. I guess I don't think they ever showed. Great. Now I have to fix MY story AND theirs.
And Kathy, thanks for the red-eye info! I'm going to make sure to fix that.
Thanks for all the comments and feedback, guys! And seriously, I WANT you guys to tell me what I've overlooked, what may not work and needs strengthened, or catch plot holes I've overlooked. Please? Pretty please?
