Sira, thanks for the feedback!
Originally posted by Sira:
in his "interview" Clark decides to call himself "a friend". But near the end of part 3 'Superman' is mentioned.... Just thought I'd point that one out.
And the other thing is pure curiosity. You keep describing his outfit as red and blue... Do you mean the classical outfit or are the colours inversed? Every time I read red and blue, I imagine a red suit with blue cape... Maybe it's just me...
Nice catches, both! I've been trying to steer clear of the "superman" word thus far in the story, so thanks for that find! I'll fix that right now. And I agree with you about the red and blue. It's minor, but I do think it could cause someone to stop and think. I just fixed those, as well.
THANKS, Sira! I appreciate it.
