Erin,
I’m sorry I haven’t posted before but I’m really enjoying your story.

I’m a sucker for the “destined to be together in any universe” genre. wink

Since Wendy already commented on my favorite bit here’s my second favorite
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Lois rolled her eyes as she turned away. Throw herself off a building? Talk about desperate. Some women were obviously more desperate for love these days than she thought.
I just love this Lois! laugh

I did notice one little thing:
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Behind him, fire fighters dashed around behind him, barking out orders and unrolling hoses so they could tackle the bright red and orange flames starting to show through the windows.
I believe one of those ‘behind him’ is redundant. wink

Looking forward to Friday,
Avia

"I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?"

Cordelia in 'Rm w/a Vu' - Angel episode 1x05