Hey Erin!
It's Veteran's Day and a holiday from teaching school (here's a salute to all of our Veteran FoLCs!). So, I jumped in and have read all of the parts to your newest story. It's great! The attraction between our two heroes when they first meet is always an enjoyable read - especially when such a talented writer posts it.
I agree that Lois' article in the Chronicle could have been a great story without revealing Clark's secret but I was thinking that was a perfect opportunity for Lois to quit and move to be with him. I'm thinking that the two are going to be training their sites on Lex soon. Anyway, I am enjoying the plot and the descriptive flare that you have. Very nicely done.
Now, write on!
Anne (the San Jose, Piedmont Hills, tennis, horseback riding one!)
