All right, I'm just really quickly flying by here. I'm trying my best to catch up - which is quite hard on dial-up and a two-month absence - and I'm quite enjoying this story.
For one thing, it is quite original. The whole triangle between Lois, Lex and Clark is excellent. At first you showed us a Lex that seemed to be threating Lois well, and then suddenly he's trying to murder her? There are two options here, I think. Either Lois told him she wanted a divorce or Lex found out Lois had been seeing another man on the beach. Both is possible too, of course.
And while I was pretty sure Lois wasn't dead and Clark would find her in time, right now I haven't a clue how you're going to solve this - besides the happy ending that sure is to come after a long while of evil suffering.
Thanks for getting me hooked, and thus making sure I'm getting back into things so far away from home!
But you can post the next part now. <g>
Sas
