She curled up on the bed, hugging a pillow to her chest. Unbidden, tears rolled down her cheeks. She didn’t fight them. Loneliness was taking its toll on her.
Poor poor Lois!
I just read the story for what it is. I think you cannot keep writing the same thing over and over again. You have to use your imagination and enter the 'what if' realm. It can be fun and interesting. It keeps us challenged and entertained. In my opinion, the boundries need to be tested, explored and cherished b/c it keeps this fandom alive.
Now, where is that Clark. He's in big trouble if he comes to my house! Yes Clark come to my house
Since he's already in 'trouble' with Lois, why not just tell her! I know I know, I understand why. Lois can have some sort of closure over CK's death and not with a so-called dead Clark hanging around.....and so on.
Ugh the agony. I don't know what to say other than I am anxiously waiting for the next part.
Plse soon!! Silly schedules.
