Anna,
part 3, let me see:
as engrossing as part 2 and I'm with Jose on the restaurant line. LOL.
awesome introspections smoothly melt with your storyline.
Torn-sometime irritating-but-hey! Lois
Torn-and-very-normal Clark
Me wonders how you'll get them back together. But do they really deserve it? (/me zooms to re-read first draft).
Part 4... coming ?
