Nice twist at the end there. It made sense given her ruthlessness in the control room.
A good story, which focused on Lois' torture and her eventual rescue, but there is much more to tell if you wish to.
Lois is not going to get over this in a few days. It will also provide the impetus for a change in her relationship with Clark. And, as you had Carmen allude to, Clark is now probably in Intergang's cross hairs.
Quite a bit there for more exploration.
Good story
Tank (who thinks that Carmen might have a bit to worry about too... awfully public for a cleaner)
