Hi,
Great part.
Clark don't seem to have much interest in his kids.
“Lois! Look, you’ve only just got here. I’m sorry I shouldn’t have shouted like that.”
“Damn right you shouldn’t have.” Lois flung her jumper over her shoulder. “Give me one good reason why I should stay?”
A long miserable silence filled the air of Clark’s apartment. Lois was waiting for an answer with gritted teeth. “Your silence speaks volumes. I’m gonna take a walk and get some fresh air, I’m sure you’ll be able to find me when you have something to say.” Rooted to the spot, he let her go.
Lois should take a plane back to Smallville, I don't think Clark have any interest in anything.
He seem to be doing it under obligation not because he wants to be with them.
More ASAP, please.
MAF
