Wonderful, Julie! I love how you did this, between drunken Lois, the revelation about feelings, and the revelation about Superman. I liked the lines listed above, and I also liked
First, she’d missed the biggest criminal in the galaxy right under her nose, then *Superman.* Superman, the world’s strongest man and renowned superhero – under her nose.
Her nose wasn’t very reliable, she noted to herself, and then almost giggled at the idea.
Hehe
You know you're going to be nagged lots for stories, right?
