OMG Wendy!! Loving this so far...and I gotta hit on lines already mentioned but...
Angry, frustrated, devastated, he closed his eyes. His shoulders slumped. It had been a crazy idea, anyway. The idea of a desperate man. Did he really want a clone Lois? Was he so unable to come to terms with the fact that she was dead that he’d be willing to interfere with nature to that degree?
YES!!!YES YOU SHOULD BE WILLING, CLARK!!!

good job.
TEEEEEEJ