I frequently cry at fanfics, well, fanfics which you may crying on, obviously(just speaking about Wendy' fanfics, "For the greater good" comes to my mind, but other writers could say something about my weeping on their stories too), and this part is not an exception!
How are you going to fix this? It seems without hope for an happy ending, above all because of there is only one part to go! (But with your "When you said you love me" you proved me wrong... hint...hint...) I'm going to check the exact state of Lois's body, I don't remember very well what you said about it...
