Fantastic job, Wendy!! Never would have expected that. What I really love is that you *didn't* have the Fates simply bring Lois back to life, they gave her a second chance instead by turning back time. So much better this way! No messy cover story for why she was suddenly alive again.
I think the scene in the Jeep is my favorite. Love her slow realization of what had happened, and that she didn't quite grasp all of it, but knew enough to make some good decisions.
I have one question though:
“Hey.” His lips curved in a sweet smile. “Welcome back, partner! You looked like you were on another planet for a while there.”
Can Clark get any more sweet?! *sigh* I can just hear his soft voice, caring but with a little bit of humor.
“Step on it, Kent.”
He grinned. “For you, Lois, anything.” And the Jeep picked up speed.
So cute! And you know... I'd give anything to be inside Clark's head right about now.
Yet another well done story, Wendy! Brava!
