Still coming on nicely, Sara! Good to see that Lois is getting some of her old intelligence and native wit back.
Is that conversation with Perry a flashback, by the way? It has to be, because it's clearly not taking place here and now. But aren't you putting all flashbacks in italics? (which you kind of need to do because it gets confusing otherwise
).
Clark's not behaving very well, is he? It's not Emma's fault that she's not Lois. I can understand his misery, but still... he deserves a smack. But that flashback there - whoa! So he kissed Lois when she was just back from her honeymoon?
Not good behaviour, Clark!
Okay, this feels like it's going to be a very long story, so I'd better strap myself in for the ride...
Wendy
