Oh, excellent, Sara!!
The fix works perfectly. And you worked it in seamlessly. Well done!
Lois's fear for what she might bring to the Kents is palpable, and so credible. The contrast between their idyllic, ordinary,
safe lifestyle and what she's running from is stark, and I can see very clearly why she backs away from involving them.
As for Clark, how could a man be more tortured than he is? He's not living; he's existing.
Martha's right. He needs to come home.
Now!!! 
Wendy
