This is all so good. I know I say that every feedback folder, but this time I *really* mean it.
Thank you for your great, insightful comments. You're so smart! Have I mentioned??
Also, the rest of this piece has just landed with a loud kerplop into the collective laps of my BRs. (Those who encouraged me to keep the bakery when I almost chickened out are certainly included in that number, no matter how badly they beat me up. And, oh, it was baaaad...<g>)
Now if I may brag just the tiniest bit (if I get insufferable, do cover your eyes and I'll apologize ahead of time...), the whole fic works out to
18 parts! 18!!
Ok, if you consider that once upon I time I thought it would be four parts and I'd write it in a long weekend, that's not quite a victory.
But let's not consider that. Instead, I'm thinking back to when I pulled out all the pieces, took a good long look, and feared I was looking at a 30 part fic...
18 parts, people!
Only six more to go, and they'll be up on schedule next week.
Thank you for staying with me. Can't tell you how well I appreciate it. (I know I always say that, but this time I *really* mean it.)
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