Sucks, my foot!
This was a great story. I loved the women teaming up to investigate. Everything was well thought out and crafted.
“Clark,”
“Lois,” the two said simultaneously.
“Let me go first, please.” Lois asked.
Before Clark could reply, and before she could lose her nerve, Lois blurted out “Willyougooutwithme?”
Awww, loved that part! I fully expected...well scratch that, I never really know what to expect with these rewrites, but I always love it when lunkhead Clark doesn't go first. :p
Anywho, great story, and **coughwritethesequelcough**
JD
