Now... considering my author's note... and those of you that know my feedback habits... you wouldn't expect anything but long and rambling for this post, right?? Thought so.
You really, really love to torture poor Clark, don't you? When I started reading WYWG I was ready to put Clark into witness protection, but slowly you've turned me into a convert. Your amazing writing, your amazing... ability to... be amazing. *This* line is one of the lines that sealed the deal for me. I *love* this line. Really. The despair comes across so clearly... really... it's just... amazing.
I love you, you know that, right, David?
With that great feedback, I suppose I can forgive you for making everyone think this will be 53 parts. And... if for some *odd* reason, this morphs into something that long... well, I'll gladly eat my words. <G>
Whats scary is that I recognize so much of what he's feeling. I've felt that numb feeling before, there are days when I just don't feel like I want wake up and face life. Days when I'd rather no one knew I was home. So I can really imagine what Clark's going through.
Jenni, I love you forever for this comment right here. I love that you pointed out your favorite parts, too, but this is so great. Not the fact that you've felt this way, obviously
, but that I managed to accomplish something I wasn't quite sure I would. I never dreamed I'd get empathy comments.
Very good. The description was perfect. I could feel Clark's depression and imagine the way he looked. I have no clue where this story is going but if I have learned anything from fanfic is that all things are possible
Thanks, Kelly! I'm glad you're enjoying so far.
Oh!! Start me off with a sucker-punch, why don't you… whatever happened to introducing things gently???
Oh, but, mo chara, you left out the rest of your comment! The part right after that said:
/me sneaks a peek at first scene of MtbB… yeah… okay… maybe I can't talk
I'm just saying...
But as much as I have to insist that you're still the more evil one <g>, I really, really *loved* all your comments! From the reluctant snuffles and "Oh, poor Clark"s to the hilarious never-ending begging at the bottom. You never fail to make my day!
You did a superb job portraying his despair, pain and feeling of hopelessness. Extremely realistic and heartwrenching!
Yay! Thanks, Tricia! I'm really happy that I seem to be pulling this off... so far. <g>
I think I already told you that this is even better than Wherever You Will Go, but I'm going to tell you again now. This is so well written - I'm envious!!
Whoa... double take... Wendy's envious?! Of moi?! No, must be reading that wrong. Thank you SO much for all your comments... and help, and inspiration, and encouragement.
Good God, Sara. Your turning me into a baby. /me wipes tear.
So sorry, Rachie!!
Part two up in a bit!
Sara
