Wow...and I thought Clark had it tough...

Oooh! Way to open with suspense! That first line just sucks you in, gotta find out if she dies. (by the way I'm so glad she's alive)

I love all the little details like: "scratchy airline pillow"

And I'm so glad she at least has Perry to come back to.

Anyway I'm no good at fdk so I'll just end with one last comment... I love the way your writing makes me feel what the characters are feeling! You're a wonderful writer and I hope you never stop writing notworthy

so...you got any more? please? grovel

In this life of froth and bubble,
Two things stand like stone.
Kindness in another's trouble,
Courage in your own.