Oh, wow! Really, really good, Sara!
The first person works so well here for Clark's confusion, disbelief, fear and, in the end, determination. And you have some marvellous lines - I had to laugh at this:
"Now you have to go out and stop this... this thing," she says, frowning. "Which is just the worst case of bad timing *ever*..."
I raise an eyebrow at her.
"I'm going to have to wait till you get home to bawl you out," she explains.
Wendy
