Sorry for not posting FDK on all the parts but real life attacked me all at once, so while I made time to read the parts (well...I...I'm hooked) I didn't manage to find time to post
I love this fic and your writing, and this part was so...aw!
For so long, the only part of himself he'd known... was the dark part.
Clark keeps thinking he should be feeling the same deep love for Lois that he knows the other Clark has...dude, the other Clark has known his Lois for YEARS!
how was he supposed to love someone when he couldn't even love himself?
And the poor guy doesn't think he's lovable or capable of love anyways does he? Aw...
He tried not to hear the man's choking, the gasping for breath.
OMG! Clark! Get your butt up off the floor and stop feeling sorry for yourself and save that man!
The sound cut at her, seized her heart. And the image before her, a fallen superhero, shook her mercilessly.
Wow...your writing is so...just, wow! That was an awsome bit right there!
And Sara...don't worry about us, we'll wait as long as it takes for you to finish this fic, just take care of yourself and do what ya gotta do, life gets busy for everyone sometimes. Anyways I'm starting to babble now so I better shut up.
