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Wow!! I never in a million years expected this... you've managed to bind all these scenes together fantastically well. Some in particular - like that clip of Lois looking through the drawer in Madame Ex, and of Superman's grave [<bg>] - I would never ever have thought of, and they work
so well. Also [and correct me if I'm wrong], the beginning uses music from My Best Friend's Wedding, right? I adore that movie and that score... and it's so apt. Wow. Wow.
And then when Iris kicks in... the way those clips flashed up onto the screen. *AMAZING*.
It's funny. I've been working on this story since August '03, and I don't think I've ever once actually pictured the characters... as *characters*. I've never pictured the story being acted out on screen
And this just brings such a clarity to it...
You're fantastic, Sara!! I adore this - *thank you*!!!
Sorcha [the stunned and very grateful one]
PS - another thank you to everybody who replied so far and said they liked the story...
