Hi,

Great part. grumble So everyone knew, does that include the husband?

grumble Does the coach and Lilah still alive and living in Smallville?

confused Jess was the one who die or he die later?


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Simon Hunt was walking quickly across the parking lot. There was something familiar about his walk, which was precise and with a rigid posture. If she didn’t know better, she’d have thought he was in the military.
eek She needs to investigated Hunt and tide him to all the mess and clear Clark.

confused What happen to Kent's farm?


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Hunt pulled something from the pocket of his trench coat. Hunt was turned away from Lois, and she couldn’t see what it was.

“Where did you get that?” Clark asked in a strangled voice.

“It’s amazing what family will do when times get a little desperate.” Hunt grinned. “It worked for me the first time. I’ll bet you can make it work again.”

“That belonged to my parents,” Clark struggled to rise to his feet, then he froze. “It worked for you?”

“I know what you are, Mr. Kent. When I’m done, so will the rest of the world.” Hunt grinned. “How long do you think it will be before the government takes care of things in the name of national security.”
eek I assume Hunt a.k.a. Trask is talking about the globe.

grumble I can't imagine the Kent's taken the globe to a pawnshop.


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“Haven’t you heard?” Hunt asked smugly. “The military pulled out this morning. So did the EPA.”
confused Does this mean Trask's ex-partner is pulling out so he can proof that he was right?


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“Oh, my story hasn’t changed,” Hunt said, looking directly at Clark. “Just the source of my investigation.”
eek Clark needs to tell Lois more and she needs to move faster.


In part 12
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All he could remember of the nightmare was the gleaming scalpel and the soulless eyes above a white mask, flashes of dissection tables and prison bars. It was the same dream that had recurred time and time again since the accident. Being forever locked away, being seen as less than an animal, less than human, of never being loved; this was every childhood fear in a single, terrifying dream.
confused Was this a dream or a re-collections of something that happen when his parents die?

More ASAP, please.

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Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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