Gerry,
This is really interesting!! Disjointed, yes!! But I am hoping like you said it'll all become clear soon!
When Clark returned, ten hours later, he was tired, dirty and excited. Sniffing the air, he wandered into the kitchen. The slow cooker was on Low, but when he lifted the lid, the ingredients were dried out and burned around the edges. Not enough soup stock, he thought with a smile.
He approached Lois who had fallen asleep on the couch watching the news. He kissed her gently on the forehead. "Definitely didn’t fall in love with you for your abilities in the kitchen," he whispered.
BIG smile at that part... it's so them and so cute! I loved their interaction all throughout; the characterization was perfect!
I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going!
~NICOLE
