This part was so powerful. Lois' reaction to finally seeing 'Clark' and his reaction to her was beautifully written. I was in tears.
Great job. I'm still loving this story and am dying to finish it.
I do have to say, though, that I full-heartedly agree with Tank. Not that this, or any other TOGOM story is bad or wrong. I would just like to see future ones pay a little respect to Clark's reasoning.
Why not "we have another chance"? Lois' line touched me as rather self-centered.
I kind of take her wording because she never got her chance to tell him that she loved him. I think, and I could be wrong, as far as this story line goes she doesn't know for absolute sure that Clark loves her as much as he does. She may have an inkling, but he never flat out admits it. Just my opinion.
Can't wait till tomorrow.
~Kristen