The skill with which you flashback/foreshadow leaves me in awe. The way in which you have introduced the foreshadowing of some intriguing new plot twists leaves me on the edge of my seat in anticipation of "what happens next?" The characterizations/motivations of your characters are flawless; not a single character in this story has been a cardboard cutout. Considering how many different characters you are working with, and that each and every one of them has been defined a hundred times over already, that's quite an accomplishment. I am
extremely impressed. I am also thoroughly enjoying myself. Bravo.
