I liked that first part. I would like to read the next right now.

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And then he continued on his way, realizing that for the first time in his life, he had absolutely no hope at all that anything in his life would work out. And what was worse, he no longer cared.
That sentence was the best description of the depression I read. It's a sentence simple, but the whole emptiness and despair are in it.

That was really good.