I really like the motivation you have for Anna's struggle with her powers. And I like the idea of having Lois figure it out.

And I must admit when I read it the first time, the Tim and Amber Lake connection caught me off guard. But they are the perfect people to use here. If one of them died, I have no doubt at all that the other would do whatever was necessary to bring them back to life. Great use of seldom used characters.

But I think it's all over for David and Anna. So sad frown . I doubt David is ever going to forgive her now.

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She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane