Don't you hate it when you get good ideas and have to wait to execute them? I carry a small pad of paper in my purse just for that reason. <g>
I liked the part where the lyrics said "if you call my name" and Lois started saying Clark and he started saying "Lois" - awww... so sweet.
Yeah, the ending was a little long. You did so great with the sepia flashbacks... maybe you could have added a few more of those mixed in at the end...
But thanks for sharing.
-- DJ
