I cheated. I just read parts 1 - 7, and I couldn't wait. I had to read the end, so I went over to the other fanfic site. Is that allowed?
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I LOVE THIS STORY! Ditto to every single compliment and positive feedback that everyone else has written for all 7 parts posted so far.
Everything you wrote was completely in character for both Lois and Clark. I especially liked how you emphasized what Clark gave up for Lois, as most fics focus on The Lie, and how terrible it was to let her think he was dead, without really getting into all that Clark suffered, too. So, kudos for that.
After you finish posting this story, I hope you post others. More please!
- Vicki
