Well, now that you've submitted this one to the Archive, Anna, I couldn't resist reading it after catching the first few lines while checking over the file.

Absolutely adorable! Loved it to bits. I'm not usually a big fan of first person narrative, but this worked very well and I think using anything else wouldn't have been half as effective. Terribly cute.

And this:

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“Who loves me?” I manage. “Clark, or Superman?”

“*I* love you,” he simply says.
made me go all snuffly. thumbsup

LabRat smile



Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.


The Musketeers