I read your story from the beginning to the ending. Once I started reading it I couldn't stop.
Great work!
You moved scenes in the time frame but managed to keep it aligned with canon. And you captured the essence of the characters, it was easy to "hear" their voices and "see" their interactions.
Just a pity that Clark and Lois didn't get to talk about her hot memories from the future and Clark didn't get to know about it.
But happily they can make new memories now.
Hummm.... no pressure but... how is your new story going?
Andreia
