Shayne,
Great wrap-up. All the loose ends got nicely tied off and there was a very happy ending. I liked that you also softened up Rachel and made her and Lois buddies. I also liked the banter at the end between Lois and Clark.
Overall, a very interesting and satisfying story. I look forward to seeing more stories from you in the future (hint, hint).
AnnN. (Cindy)
