Ready for the next part!!

okay

Adorable!

So, WAFFy with delight. I love Lois watching Clark through the copy room window, except that in your story, Clark seems to be sitting at Lois's desk. His desk faces the window (on the show) with his back to the outside wall.
Thanks. It's full off WAFF.
You can imagine Clark in whichever seat you want. There are actually 2 doors into the copy room, and I see it a slightly off to one side too, so if Clark looked straight up he'd be looking at a wall. Turn his head to the left ... and he'll see the window to the copy room.
“Maybe I should give you a scare.” He stood and stepped closer to her. When her eyes widened in fear he stopped.
“That’s what started them,” she rushed to answer then held her breath again.
Thinking about Clark getting close made her hiccup? I thought it was being interrupted from daydreaming about him is what gave her the hiccups. Also, why are her eyes widening in fear? Because she know how she'll react if he tries do anything semi-romantically? As in, resistance is futile? And she's scared of losing Mr. Right by using him as a Mr. Right Now?
So many questions. *tut* *tut*
“Mom used to rub the area between my shoulder-blades.”
How come I hope Mrs. Kent didn't touch Clark like this?...
It's perfectly ordinary ... except when Clark does it ...
Lois is going to have a hard time keeping herself in check if she melts every time he touches her.
You'll see how she reacts to him touching her ... quite a few times over the next few chapters.
Damn it. He does it on purpose.
Awww. You don't think so, do you, Lois? I'm sure he delights in her reaction but he never expects it, does he?
There are actually two (I think) scenes from Clark's POV so you do get to see his thoughts about all this ... and what he's thinking about Lois' behaviour.
[quote=Mr. Right or Mr. "Right Now" Pt.1]“Maybe I should give you a scare.” He stood and stepped closer to her. When her eyes widened in fear he stopped.
“That’s what started them,” she rushed to answer then held her breath again.
Thinking about Clark getting close made her hiccup? I thought it was being interrupted from daydreaming about him is what gave her the hiccups.
I guess it was the scare that gave her the hiccups, when Jeff let the door bang against the wall.
Yup, it was the bang of the door.
Loving it!

Is Clark aware of Lois watching him? Maybe he
is doing it on purpose.

More, please!

Thanks. Maybe he is ...