Hi KK/V!

It was the flashlight smile Lois has a penlight that she's using. That was the ONE thing that I could see, as the extra 'u' in some words is fine.

Maybe the fire-on-a-stick word you were looking for is a brand? Firebrand?

Anyway, looking forward to Pt 4 laugh

"It's the mythology of a sun god who wished he was a man because he saw something so great in us.
It's the story of a hero who could move whole worlds and see through stars and hear a whisper on the other side of the planet...
...and who fell in love with a storyteller." - ashmaht (x)